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Your Lies have almost took my life

Your Lies have almost took my life,
Pretty blind, now I see your knife,
Cutting me down to earth,
Do you even know how much that hurts?

Of course you do,
Because it's you,
It's fun to see me on the ground ,
Look around ,look around!


All my pain is your work
All my blood your joy,
Am I just your little voodoo toy?
Am I the dork?


And yes, you're really made it,
Looking at me
I'm on my knees
Begging for my life, which seems to flee

And all the flames ,they hit and hurt
Goodbye my life ,goodbye my love
Your lies have took me life…
And nobody will believe me...
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t-florencestay Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
very true!
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Diblet Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I know exactly were you come from.
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MlleKona Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student
Beautiful <3
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xXFluffyGenocideXx Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Absolutely beautiful.
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MrBassMan6132 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That moment when the picture is smaller than its preview.
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UniqueAnimeFan33 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I feel so bad for the person you based this off of.
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KittyClaw12 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this made me cry good job at this
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sonicgirl125 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing poetry
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Alex57691 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
<3
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Freezingsteelmurder Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
i am the only one who's actually been, and still there? TT.TT

amazing poem :D it gets the message across and still rhymes throughout the whole thing...i dont know how you people do it^^
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swallowedintheseax Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Oh.. Oh, excuse me, there's something in my eyes..
Who.. Who's cutting onions on a Monday night...?
*sniffles*
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SkyHighFae Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
oOo Nice poem! I really like it!
And who took the pic? o.o
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HarleKlown Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice!
Can I ask where you got the cover picture?? 8OO
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Lola-luvs-cookies Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Very Nice poem
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ilovepandabubba Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
That was me once...
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akiokid Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you, my good man (i call everyone a man, sorry) are a true artist. this makes me think of so many times in my life
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Tamxt Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
thats not true i believe you i used to be just like that. In a way at least and while I dont know the specific incident that is troubling you I do believe that every person is something special has something to give to this world. I also believe that NO ONE has the right to make you feel this way and that EVERY Person deserves respect and honesty. I recognize that you are probably in pain right now and that your situation is unique to you but I want you to know that I once considered taking my own life I have been to that dark Place and that Most importantly you have someone to talk to who will listen. I hope you are still here to read this, and I also hope that no matter what else your going through that you have a wonderful day :) please feel free to talk if it will help. just know that someone cares
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shadowslider10 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
right in the feels
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FashionPortfolio Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
You give the evil people too much power over your life. Don't be a slave to darkness and feed the demons. Don't settle with trash. You are more precious than that. Suicide sends you straight to hell. (READ John 3:16 in the Holy Bible)
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SuperCharlieLover Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awwwww, I believe you!! :hug:
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TheQueenOfFairies Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Digital Artist
Das ist voll gut geworden das Gedicht. Man kann den Schmerz förmlich fühlen =(
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MrBHS Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Very sad but very true.
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Flocki07 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist
wow... zurzeit schreibst du so geile sachen *___________________*
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kagome-imamazing Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
That's really sad, is this based on a personal experience? If so, I am so sorry.
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